Post by Teo Sage on Sept 1, 2011 19:35:14 GMT -5
Before I begin yes this is a Kingdom Hearts fanfic I JUST started I know most of you guys if not all have played the games and are fans yourselves so what better way to portray my new work then to have it critiqued by my good friends?
I will scrap it if its no good but if you guys like it I'll continue writing it so I hope you enjoy.
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Chapter 1: So it Begins
“Well done child you have completed your tasks with little trouble…..”
“Thank you master it is what I have been training for……”
“You will bring a great age for the wielders perhaps you can surpass him…..”
“Brother, I’ve finally become……”
“You expect me to believe that? Come at me little brother…..”
“Ha ha ha! You fight well for someone of your age……….”
“One day I’ll become stronger then you………..”
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“Brother something’s wrong…………..”
“It’s the keyhole……..”
“Darkness………….”
“The master………..”
“Its to late now…….”
“Foolish this world is already being destroyed thanks to……..”
“Rai……run get away from here……..”
“Brother………”
“You cannot escape………”
“Your fight is with me……….”
“BROTHER NOOO………..”
“…..oh…..” The boy said as he got up from the sands he had been resting on he was almost completely covered in the sand. He held his head. “What a headache……” The boy stood up as he looked around. He was about the age of fifteen his clothes had been torn.
Behind him lay a ship in tatters unable to be repaired not that he knew how to make repairs to begin with. He couldn’t even remember who he was or what happened that he even wound up in the desert from the start.
The boy placed his hand on the ship and wiped it with his index and middle fingers. “This is soot….was it burning?” He said as he played with the soot on his fingers.
“How did I end up here? Where is this place?” The boy said he looked around but could recognize nothing. “I can’t remember anything” He looked around some more but no matter how much he looked nothing changed so he finally decided to walk maybe he would end up somewhere.
He walked about fifty feet from where he woke and without realizing something in the sand he had tripped and landed face first in the sand. “Ow…what did I trip on?” He said as he got to his knees and turned to see what he tripped over.
There was a black lump in the sand it began to move struggling to free itself from the sand. It finally managed to do so but it was a creature unfamiliar to this young boy, the black lump was a small black creature with crooked antenna and yellow orb like eyes.
“Was it you I tripped over…..?” He asked it but the small creature did not respond it blankly stared at him. “Puri~” it said as it blinked. “Pu--ri?”
“Are you hurt?”
“Puri~” It said again it perked up a little bit and began to look around.
“What is your name?”
It said nothing as it walked to a place in the sand and began to dig it looked back at the boy “Puri~” it blinked as it went back to digging.
“What is it?” He said the boy crawled over to the black creature and began to dig a few moments went by when something began to shine as it came to the surface “Aw….” it caught the boys interest and he began to dig faster.
The creature backed off to let the boy finish digging finally it was unveiled it was an odd shaped weapon. The hilt was a circle with metal teeth on the outer part and colored gold the blade itself was even stranger it had a upper, middle, and lower blade that were all close together but had a gap between each to indicate that each was its own blade. Each blade was colored white with a gold lining.
The lower blade had the only distinct difference from the other two, as it got towards the end farthest from the hilt it curved in and formed a “C” like attribute which caused the other two blades to curve slightly following its shape. Hanging down from the inner part of the “C” was a white cross. Its key chain was the crest of the Keyblade Wielders which was the same crest that appeared on the boys shirt.
“What is this….?” the boy reached out and grabbed the weapons hilt and he lifted it. Suddenly a pain went through his head “Ahh!”
“………..Keyblade………Golgotha…….”
“Keyblade…..Golgotha…..I don’t know why but….I feel as if this….is mine.” He said the boy then looked at the creature as it stared back at him. “Puri~”
“You like to say Puri a lot……… I got it! I’ll name you Puri.” The boy smiled. Puri looked at him it tilted its head to the side and blinked. “Puri~”
Before long the boy continued walking with no objectives and with no clue as to where to go or if there was even a place to go Puri followed behind. As the two were walking, in front of them was a massive sand cloud heading their way. “Puri…what is that?” “Puri~”.
It got closer real fast something suddenly came into view someone could be seen in front of the dust cloud on a hover bike.
“Hm? There’s someone out here this far into the desert?” She said she drove closer to get a better look as she got closer she could see Puri behind the boy. “What in the? A heartless? Out here? Doesn’t he notice it? He might be exhausted from the desert I’ll have to save him myself.” She said she stood up on her bike and jumped off mid-jump she pulled out a gun from a pouch strapped to her leg.
It had two barrels indicating a shotgun but it also had a long blade going along the top of the gun that extended to its full size when she pulled it from its pouch the blade was about seven inches in length and two when retracted. “Boy, look out!” She yelled as she landed and aimed her weapon at Puri.
“Puri, is that person talking to us?”
“Puri~” Puri looked up and noticed she was targeting it “PUUUURIIIIIII~!” Puri began to run frantically in a cartoon like fashion.
“As if you could escape.” She said as she pulled the trigger “PUUUUURIIIIII~!!!!!” Puri jumped around in a frantic motion dodging the bullets. “Tsk fast little bugger.” She said as she continued firing at it.
“Hey stop cut it out! Leave Puri alone!” He yelled at the woman “Puri?” She looked at the heartless. “You’ve named it Puri? Kid, that’s a heartless not a pet.” She said as she continued shooting at Puri. “Puri isn’t a pet he is my friend!”
“Now I know your delusional just stay there I’ll help you when I’m done.” She said she ran out of ammo not to long after. “Well, that’s unfortunate should have brought that extra clip afterall.” She said as the clip came out of the bottom of the gun. “Oh well a single slash from the Falcon Gunblade should be enough to kill such a weak heartless.” She said as she ran at Puri to slash him showing decent running speed even in the desert sands.
“PUUUUUUUURIIIIIII~!!!!” Puri cried as it became frightened “I said STOOOOOP!” The boy said as the Falcon Gunblade collided with Golgotha the sand below rippled from the impact. The boy pushed the woman back she jumped back a few feet ending with an acrobatic flip and looked at the keyblade “That weapon….”
“I said leave Puri alone!” He said as he gripped Golgotha with both hands and lifted it in a defensive stance, Puri hid behind his leg. “Puriiiii~” It said in an almost relieved way.
There was a small silence then the woman put her Falcon Gunblade away “Very well.” The boy became relaxed and put Golgotha down “Now who are you?” The boy asked. She smiled and snapped her fingers her hover bike came to her “We can introduce ourselves when we get out of this sand pit.” She said as she boarded her bike and padded the seat behind her.
“Well come on kid get on lets get to town before dark.” The boy hesitantly got on behind her Puri jumped on his lap. “Now put your arms around my waist so you don’t fall off.” He did as he was instructed. “Good, here we go.” She revved the bike and it took off.
After an hour or so they arrived at a town they stopped at a building with Motel in blinking lights hanging above. “Here we are.” She turned to see he had fallen asleep on her back Puri asleep on his leg. “Huh poor guy he must have had it rough out there.” She carried him inside.
…Brother when are you going to come back…..
….I told you when ever I finish my mission……
….Can I come……
….You know you can’t do that your not a Keyblade Wielder…..
….I can’t help……
….don’t worry Rai you start at the academy soon…..
….Ok promise to come back so you can help me with my first day….
….I promise……
The boy woke up tucked in a bed he was in his underwear Puri sleeping on top of his chest Puri awoke once he got up from his bed. He looked around and noticed his clothes laying at the end of his bed they had been repaired.
“Did….she do that?” He wondered as he got dressed repaired, he wore a dark blue leather short sleeved shirt with a crest of the Keyblade Wielders sewn into the fabric he had a spaulder on his right shoulder corresponding to his dominate hand of which he wields Golgotha. He wears black jeans held by a grey belt. He has a shin guard on his left leg overlapping the jeans. He wears armored boots that despite their appearance allow free movement. “Their like new….” Puri walked next to him “Puri~” Puri walked towards the door and looked at him “Puri~”
“Oh.” He walked towards the door and opened it there was a set of steps he followed them downstairs the two entered a room which looked very much like a bar, a tall man with a cigarette in his mouth looking about middle aged stood behind a counter was cleaning a glass cup. He noticed the boy and Puri.
“So your awake huh? HEY YOUR KIDS AWAKE!” The man yelled shortly after the same woman walked out. “I told you already Pops he isn’t my kid I found him in the desert during one of my runs.” She said as she walked towards the pair. “Yea yea sure.” Pops responded.
“Well sleeping beauty its good to see you didn’t die your body was frail and weak.” She said as she turned towards the counter and took a plate of food out from behind.
“Here, its your dinner I saved you a plate.”
“Thank you….” He sat down and took a bite his eyes widened and he began to eat frantically. “Wow, Jen he actually likes your cooking.” Pops laughed.
“Oh be quiet old man.” She said Jen was a woman the age of twenty three with a slim figure she was tall with long blue hair she had a red shirt which exposed her stomach and most of her cleavage, she wore brown shorts that stopped at her knees strapped to her left leg was the pouch which the Falcon Gunblade rested. She wore black boots a short one on her left leg which stopped right where the straps for her pouch were where as the other one stopped at the base of her knee on her right. She also would wear a large brown coat when ever she had to leave the motel, she always had red lipstick.
Puri stared as the boy ate he looked at Puri “Are you hungry Puri?” He said as he handed Puri a piece of meat Puri gulped it down in one shot. He finished his food as he looked up at Jen.
“Thank you again for the food.”
“If you really want to thank me how about telling us your name and why you were in the desert.” Jen asked. He remained silent for a short time “My….name….”
Jen gave him a strange look “What’s wrong you don’t know your name?” She asked. “I’m not sure what my name is….but….I think its Rai.” He said unsure of himself.
“How could you be unsure of your own name? Well what about you being in the desert?”
“I don’t know I can’t remember anything all I know is that I woke up next to a big metal bird that was broken, then I found Puri and this.” Rai said as he summoned Golgotha.
“Well I’ll be…” Pops said taking the cigarette out of his mouth tapped it twice and looked at Golgotha. “That’s a Keyblade.” Pops said.
“I knew it was.” Jen stated she looked at Rai “Aren’t you a little young to be a Keyblade Wielder?”
“I don’t know I can’t remember my past. Instead I think I dream of it like fragments of my memories trying to come back to me but I can’t make anything of them.” Rai responded as Golgotha vanished.
“You don’t remember anything? Nothing at all?” Pops said. “Not a thing.”
“Could you have been on the Gummi Ship that crashed in the desert a week ago? There was a nasty sandstorm so nobody could go looking for it.” Jen said. “Perhaps the crash gave you temporary amnesia.”
“I have so many questions about my dreams, about my past but I don’t know where to look.” Rai said Puri looked at him then at Jen “Puri~” he said saddened.
“Why are you traveling with a heartless?” Pops asked. “Heartless? This is Puri he and I are friends.” Rai responded. When Pops heard that he couldn’t help himself but laugh hysterical as if something was tickling his gut he held it.
“Hah hah now I’ve seen everything a Keyblade Wielder befriending a heartless!” Pops said as he walked into the back room still laughing. “He isn’t a heartless! What ever that is.” Rai said with an angered tone.
“Don’t mind him Rai he is a senile old fathead.” Jen said. “And you’re a slutty whore.” Pops said from the back. “SHUT IT POPS!” Jen snapped.
Rai smiled at the two bickering “Anyway Rai how about going to the temple of Keyblades? Perhaps there is someone there that can help you remember after all you bear their crest on your shirt.” Jen said as she pointed it out.
“I am?” Rai looked down and looked at the emblem sewn right into the fabric on his shirt. The emblem was shaped in as a gold crown as the frame with a gold imprint of two Kingdom Keys crossing each other in the middle of the crown, inside a heart with the letters KH imprinted on the bottom of the crown just below the heart.
“Is that what this is?” Rai asked. “Wow you really are clueless aren’t you? And I bet you haven’t clue on how to get there?”
“No…I don’t” Rai said Puri rested on Rai’s legs and let out a sigh “Well I suppose since I helped you this far I better finish the job besides I couldn’t sleep at night knowing a kid is wandering the desert without a sense of direction…”
“Okay its settled I’ll help you get to the Temple of Keyblades rest up because we leave at sunrise.” Jen said as she grabbed her coat and walked towards the door.
“Hey where are you going?” Rai asked. “Well we have a long journey ahead of us I’m going to some shops to get some things we will need.” Jen said as she opened the door and stepped through before closing it she said “If you need to bathe the shower is the room to the left of where you were resting.” The door closed Rai and Puri were alone.
“Aren’t we lucky Puri to find nice people who will help us find our way.” Rai said as he lifted Puri to his face. Puri looked at him blankly “Puri~” it blinked twice.
“Who knows Puri we might even find out about you.” Rai said he placed Puri back on the ground the two walked back up the steps to the showers then to go back to sleep for their journey was about to begin.
End Chapter 1
I will scrap it if its no good but if you guys like it I'll continue writing it so I hope you enjoy.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Chapter 1: So it Begins
“Well done child you have completed your tasks with little trouble…..”
“Thank you master it is what I have been training for……”
“You will bring a great age for the wielders perhaps you can surpass him…..”
“Brother, I’ve finally become……”
“You expect me to believe that? Come at me little brother…..”
“Ha ha ha! You fight well for someone of your age……….”
“One day I’ll become stronger then you………..”
…………….
…………….
…………….
…………….
“Brother something’s wrong…………..”
“It’s the keyhole……..”
“Darkness………….”
“The master………..”
“Its to late now…….”
“Foolish this world is already being destroyed thanks to……..”
“Rai……run get away from here……..”
“Brother………”
“You cannot escape………”
“Your fight is with me……….”
“BROTHER NOOO………..”
“…..oh…..” The boy said as he got up from the sands he had been resting on he was almost completely covered in the sand. He held his head. “What a headache……” The boy stood up as he looked around. He was about the age of fifteen his clothes had been torn.
Behind him lay a ship in tatters unable to be repaired not that he knew how to make repairs to begin with. He couldn’t even remember who he was or what happened that he even wound up in the desert from the start.
The boy placed his hand on the ship and wiped it with his index and middle fingers. “This is soot….was it burning?” He said as he played with the soot on his fingers.
“How did I end up here? Where is this place?” The boy said he looked around but could recognize nothing. “I can’t remember anything” He looked around some more but no matter how much he looked nothing changed so he finally decided to walk maybe he would end up somewhere.
He walked about fifty feet from where he woke and without realizing something in the sand he had tripped and landed face first in the sand. “Ow…what did I trip on?” He said as he got to his knees and turned to see what he tripped over.
There was a black lump in the sand it began to move struggling to free itself from the sand. It finally managed to do so but it was a creature unfamiliar to this young boy, the black lump was a small black creature with crooked antenna and yellow orb like eyes.
“Was it you I tripped over…..?” He asked it but the small creature did not respond it blankly stared at him. “Puri~” it said as it blinked. “Pu--ri?”
“Are you hurt?”
“Puri~” It said again it perked up a little bit and began to look around.
“What is your name?”
It said nothing as it walked to a place in the sand and began to dig it looked back at the boy “Puri~” it blinked as it went back to digging.
“What is it?” He said the boy crawled over to the black creature and began to dig a few moments went by when something began to shine as it came to the surface “Aw….” it caught the boys interest and he began to dig faster.
The creature backed off to let the boy finish digging finally it was unveiled it was an odd shaped weapon. The hilt was a circle with metal teeth on the outer part and colored gold the blade itself was even stranger it had a upper, middle, and lower blade that were all close together but had a gap between each to indicate that each was its own blade. Each blade was colored white with a gold lining.
The lower blade had the only distinct difference from the other two, as it got towards the end farthest from the hilt it curved in and formed a “C” like attribute which caused the other two blades to curve slightly following its shape. Hanging down from the inner part of the “C” was a white cross. Its key chain was the crest of the Keyblade Wielders which was the same crest that appeared on the boys shirt.
“What is this….?” the boy reached out and grabbed the weapons hilt and he lifted it. Suddenly a pain went through his head “Ahh!”
“………..Keyblade………Golgotha…….”
“Keyblade…..Golgotha…..I don’t know why but….I feel as if this….is mine.” He said the boy then looked at the creature as it stared back at him. “Puri~”
“You like to say Puri a lot……… I got it! I’ll name you Puri.” The boy smiled. Puri looked at him it tilted its head to the side and blinked. “Puri~”
Before long the boy continued walking with no objectives and with no clue as to where to go or if there was even a place to go Puri followed behind. As the two were walking, in front of them was a massive sand cloud heading their way. “Puri…what is that?” “Puri~”.
It got closer real fast something suddenly came into view someone could be seen in front of the dust cloud on a hover bike.
“Hm? There’s someone out here this far into the desert?” She said she drove closer to get a better look as she got closer she could see Puri behind the boy. “What in the? A heartless? Out here? Doesn’t he notice it? He might be exhausted from the desert I’ll have to save him myself.” She said she stood up on her bike and jumped off mid-jump she pulled out a gun from a pouch strapped to her leg.
It had two barrels indicating a shotgun but it also had a long blade going along the top of the gun that extended to its full size when she pulled it from its pouch the blade was about seven inches in length and two when retracted. “Boy, look out!” She yelled as she landed and aimed her weapon at Puri.
“Puri, is that person talking to us?”
“Puri~” Puri looked up and noticed she was targeting it “PUUUURIIIIIII~!” Puri began to run frantically in a cartoon like fashion.
“As if you could escape.” She said as she pulled the trigger “PUUUUURIIIIII~!!!!!” Puri jumped around in a frantic motion dodging the bullets. “Tsk fast little bugger.” She said as she continued firing at it.
“Hey stop cut it out! Leave Puri alone!” He yelled at the woman “Puri?” She looked at the heartless. “You’ve named it Puri? Kid, that’s a heartless not a pet.” She said as she continued shooting at Puri. “Puri isn’t a pet he is my friend!”
“Now I know your delusional just stay there I’ll help you when I’m done.” She said she ran out of ammo not to long after. “Well, that’s unfortunate should have brought that extra clip afterall.” She said as the clip came out of the bottom of the gun. “Oh well a single slash from the Falcon Gunblade should be enough to kill such a weak heartless.” She said as she ran at Puri to slash him showing decent running speed even in the desert sands.
“PUUUUUUUURIIIIIII~!!!!” Puri cried as it became frightened “I said STOOOOOP!” The boy said as the Falcon Gunblade collided with Golgotha the sand below rippled from the impact. The boy pushed the woman back she jumped back a few feet ending with an acrobatic flip and looked at the keyblade “That weapon….”
“I said leave Puri alone!” He said as he gripped Golgotha with both hands and lifted it in a defensive stance, Puri hid behind his leg. “Puriiiii~” It said in an almost relieved way.
There was a small silence then the woman put her Falcon Gunblade away “Very well.” The boy became relaxed and put Golgotha down “Now who are you?” The boy asked. She smiled and snapped her fingers her hover bike came to her “We can introduce ourselves when we get out of this sand pit.” She said as she boarded her bike and padded the seat behind her.
“Well come on kid get on lets get to town before dark.” The boy hesitantly got on behind her Puri jumped on his lap. “Now put your arms around my waist so you don’t fall off.” He did as he was instructed. “Good, here we go.” She revved the bike and it took off.
After an hour or so they arrived at a town they stopped at a building with Motel in blinking lights hanging above. “Here we are.” She turned to see he had fallen asleep on her back Puri asleep on his leg. “Huh poor guy he must have had it rough out there.” She carried him inside.
…Brother when are you going to come back…..
….I told you when ever I finish my mission……
….Can I come……
….You know you can’t do that your not a Keyblade Wielder…..
….I can’t help……
….don’t worry Rai you start at the academy soon…..
….Ok promise to come back so you can help me with my first day….
….I promise……
The boy woke up tucked in a bed he was in his underwear Puri sleeping on top of his chest Puri awoke once he got up from his bed. He looked around and noticed his clothes laying at the end of his bed they had been repaired.
“Did….she do that?” He wondered as he got dressed repaired, he wore a dark blue leather short sleeved shirt with a crest of the Keyblade Wielders sewn into the fabric he had a spaulder on his right shoulder corresponding to his dominate hand of which he wields Golgotha. He wears black jeans held by a grey belt. He has a shin guard on his left leg overlapping the jeans. He wears armored boots that despite their appearance allow free movement. “Their like new….” Puri walked next to him “Puri~” Puri walked towards the door and looked at him “Puri~”
“Oh.” He walked towards the door and opened it there was a set of steps he followed them downstairs the two entered a room which looked very much like a bar, a tall man with a cigarette in his mouth looking about middle aged stood behind a counter was cleaning a glass cup. He noticed the boy and Puri.
“So your awake huh? HEY YOUR KIDS AWAKE!” The man yelled shortly after the same woman walked out. “I told you already Pops he isn’t my kid I found him in the desert during one of my runs.” She said as she walked towards the pair. “Yea yea sure.” Pops responded.
“Well sleeping beauty its good to see you didn’t die your body was frail and weak.” She said as she turned towards the counter and took a plate of food out from behind.
“Here, its your dinner I saved you a plate.”
“Thank you….” He sat down and took a bite his eyes widened and he began to eat frantically. “Wow, Jen he actually likes your cooking.” Pops laughed.
“Oh be quiet old man.” She said Jen was a woman the age of twenty three with a slim figure she was tall with long blue hair she had a red shirt which exposed her stomach and most of her cleavage, she wore brown shorts that stopped at her knees strapped to her left leg was the pouch which the Falcon Gunblade rested. She wore black boots a short one on her left leg which stopped right where the straps for her pouch were where as the other one stopped at the base of her knee on her right. She also would wear a large brown coat when ever she had to leave the motel, she always had red lipstick.
Puri stared as the boy ate he looked at Puri “Are you hungry Puri?” He said as he handed Puri a piece of meat Puri gulped it down in one shot. He finished his food as he looked up at Jen.
“Thank you again for the food.”
“If you really want to thank me how about telling us your name and why you were in the desert.” Jen asked. He remained silent for a short time “My….name….”
Jen gave him a strange look “What’s wrong you don’t know your name?” She asked. “I’m not sure what my name is….but….I think its Rai.” He said unsure of himself.
“How could you be unsure of your own name? Well what about you being in the desert?”
“I don’t know I can’t remember anything all I know is that I woke up next to a big metal bird that was broken, then I found Puri and this.” Rai said as he summoned Golgotha.
“Well I’ll be…” Pops said taking the cigarette out of his mouth tapped it twice and looked at Golgotha. “That’s a Keyblade.” Pops said.
“I knew it was.” Jen stated she looked at Rai “Aren’t you a little young to be a Keyblade Wielder?”
“I don’t know I can’t remember my past. Instead I think I dream of it like fragments of my memories trying to come back to me but I can’t make anything of them.” Rai responded as Golgotha vanished.
“You don’t remember anything? Nothing at all?” Pops said. “Not a thing.”
“Could you have been on the Gummi Ship that crashed in the desert a week ago? There was a nasty sandstorm so nobody could go looking for it.” Jen said. “Perhaps the crash gave you temporary amnesia.”
“I have so many questions about my dreams, about my past but I don’t know where to look.” Rai said Puri looked at him then at Jen “Puri~” he said saddened.
“Why are you traveling with a heartless?” Pops asked. “Heartless? This is Puri he and I are friends.” Rai responded. When Pops heard that he couldn’t help himself but laugh hysterical as if something was tickling his gut he held it.
“Hah hah now I’ve seen everything a Keyblade Wielder befriending a heartless!” Pops said as he walked into the back room still laughing. “He isn’t a heartless! What ever that is.” Rai said with an angered tone.
“Don’t mind him Rai he is a senile old fathead.” Jen said. “And you’re a slutty whore.” Pops said from the back. “SHUT IT POPS!” Jen snapped.
Rai smiled at the two bickering “Anyway Rai how about going to the temple of Keyblades? Perhaps there is someone there that can help you remember after all you bear their crest on your shirt.” Jen said as she pointed it out.
“I am?” Rai looked down and looked at the emblem sewn right into the fabric on his shirt. The emblem was shaped in as a gold crown as the frame with a gold imprint of two Kingdom Keys crossing each other in the middle of the crown, inside a heart with the letters KH imprinted on the bottom of the crown just below the heart.
“Is that what this is?” Rai asked. “Wow you really are clueless aren’t you? And I bet you haven’t clue on how to get there?”
“No…I don’t” Rai said Puri rested on Rai’s legs and let out a sigh “Well I suppose since I helped you this far I better finish the job besides I couldn’t sleep at night knowing a kid is wandering the desert without a sense of direction…”
“Okay its settled I’ll help you get to the Temple of Keyblades rest up because we leave at sunrise.” Jen said as she grabbed her coat and walked towards the door.
“Hey where are you going?” Rai asked. “Well we have a long journey ahead of us I’m going to some shops to get some things we will need.” Jen said as she opened the door and stepped through before closing it she said “If you need to bathe the shower is the room to the left of where you were resting.” The door closed Rai and Puri were alone.
“Aren’t we lucky Puri to find nice people who will help us find our way.” Rai said as he lifted Puri to his face. Puri looked at him blankly “Puri~” it blinked twice.
“Who knows Puri we might even find out about you.” Rai said he placed Puri back on the ground the two walked back up the steps to the showers then to go back to sleep for their journey was about to begin.
End Chapter 1