akatsa unichadro

[dragongirl9344]

Name:akatsa unichadro

Age:16

Gender:female

Personality:a little crazy, fun loving, caring

Appearance:has long black hair and blue eyes she has a birthmark in the shape of a wolf on her right arm .

Biography:Akatsa grew up as an orphan she lived most of her life in an orphanage until she finally ran away only to be adopted by a man shortly after she did. Her took her to his home and gave her a laptop and she started to go to school in the area she now lived in until the man that took her in passed away she became upset by this and stayed in her room for most of her life.
Digivice description:it is a red D3 with blue hearts

*Crest :the crest of heart:it is called the crest of heart as it is a combination of light,love,hope,and kindess it is only activated when the one who owns it feels all 4 traits at once/

Digimon partner(s):guilmon(called kensi)

lives in illinois

[Teo Sage]

Looks like you followed the template to the teeth as far as I'm concerned this is good.

Unless there are any objections from my fellow admins then I'm accepting this.

[Hewlett]

Uh, yeah. I have a minor complaint: I prefer proper grammar, spacing etc. Just makes posts easier to follow. Otherwise, I like most of this - could we remove the streets element though, and just have her adopted? Makes it a little less... odd. Also, where does she live?
Remember, when you start RPing, you need to arrive on the Lost Islet, and not in the City there.
I have plans for this one, though - she's stumbled into one of the last story arcs without realising it.

[dragongirl9344]

does the spelling count very much ?I have bad eyes for someone my age so it will take me some time to go over it and find mistakes but i will do it if i must.Is it ok if she lives in illinois?

[Hewlett]

Sure, sounds fine. And as far as spelling goes, I can cope, but try and keep your grammar and spacing on par. But yeah, you're good to go!